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A Beautiful Day To Die
created: 12/04/09 2:01PM









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Clancy, The Grim Reaper

Wendy and Katya decided to take their lunch break outside. Though spring seemed decades away, the sun was shining and the girls decided nonetheless to brave the elements, perhaps hoping to coax a little warmth from the sky a bit early. As they walked across the barren garden toward the parking lot, Wendy saw someone disappear behind the evergreen bushes and around the corner of the building.
She raised a curious eyebrow toward the surreptitious movement, 'Did you see that?'

Katya, who was already fantasizing about her tempeh chili encased in the small Tupperware container under her arm, looked up, “What?”

“I just saw a guy go around the corner.”

“Probably just Felix,” Katya said, meaning the part-time handyman.

“No. He was wearing a hood.”

“I dunno.”

The girls set it aside and continued on to the parking lot. The picnic table on the north side of the building was wet with melting, dirty snow, but the stubborn girls sat down anyway, though carefully.

“Did you see the look on--?”

“What?” Katya asked again.

Wendy nodded toward the parking lot, “There he is again!”

Katya took a bite of her chili and looked over her shoulder, chewing, “Where?”

“Right there,” Wendy pointed, “he’s coming right for us!”

It was not a guy that Wendy saw, but rather the Grim Reaper, the Harvester of Souls. He glided across the pavement toward the table where the girls sat and extended his long, knotty scythe at Wendy. He spoke, and his voice was a leathery whisper that did not come from a larynx, but slipped through a keyhole in Grandma’s attic door, “You.”

Wendy touched her chest, “Me?”

Death spoke again, his words twisting in the frigid air like brittle kindling, “YOUR TIME HAS COME!”

“Okay.”





04:26 EST   Dec 5th, 2009 – by ElizabethP
Ho hum... your tenacity pays off. Two trees eh? Well done Chris, I really like this one.



05:43 EST   Dec 5th, 2009 – by Chris Sadler
Oh good. I was worried it might be too dark for people.



07:10 EST   Dec 5th, 2009 – by Baroness Bones
This is beautiful! I love it.



13:43 EST   Dec 10th, 2009 – by Occorru Iceoras
Love the concept.



19:04 EST   Dec 10th, 2009 – by Jessica Simonoff
I love how the Grim Reaper tells Wendy she is going to die, and then she just says, 'Okay.' Beautiful!



09:21 EST   Dec 13th, 2009 – by Sara Edwards
As Alice said...curiouser and curiouser!



14:30 EST   Dec 16th, 2009 – by Owen can see you
Wow this kinda reminds me of the show dead like me



19:19 EST   Dec 16th, 2009 – by Chris Sadler
I know. That's why I didn't want Wendy sticking around too long. I like that show, but I like the idea that the Grim Reaper works alone. It heightens his depressive nature, in my opinion.



22:10 EST   Dec 18th, 2009 – by Paulina A.
OMG! I effin love this. Very good...C.S. ;) It was a comical matter. <3



02:28 EST   Dec 22nd, 2009 – by Adrian Baker
i don't know why, but when I read this, I thought of Twilight. Hmm. odd. They're right, though. This concept is frickin' awesome! The darker the better, my friend.



21:00 EST   Feb 12th, 2010 – by Nathan Lachow
Nice beginning. I just added five snippets to this story! It was pretty cool. And they're already rated and I have two comments.















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