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R.M. Bray
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created: 06/16/09 12:03PM









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A semi famous artist, Derek, has had a history of bad and embarrassing relationships. He finds refuge in his friends Michael, the successful business man, and Aaron, the homosexual artist that only paints nude women.

During one of his art shows he meets the girl of his dreams. Molly, a free lance photographer, gives him her number but he loses it almost instantly.

Give more characters if you would like. Just remember to keep the main four, Derek, Michael, Aaron and Molly.

I personally don't care if you make this story a sobbing love story or a comedy. Hell, you can make it science fiction if you would like. Make everybody robots or make them little bugs.

If you have any questions then leave questions on my page or leave them in comment form here. If you want to know where I will be going with the story the check out my branch.

I can't wait to see what you guy's come up with.

-Ryan





16:30 EST   Jun 16th, 2009 – by Camille Strauss
I love it, so free, but not too free that the whole tree gets helter-skelter with all the clashing components. Very nicely done.



18:54 EST   Jun 16th, 2009 – by Lucky Clover
nice storyline!



21:50 EST   Jun 16th, 2009 – by R.M. Bray
Thanks guys.



14:14 EST   Aug 6th, 2009 – by Kole
For some reason, the movie 'As Good As It Gets' came to mind...



23:29 EST   Aug 6th, 2009 – by R.M. Bray
never saw it.



00:10 EST   Aug 7th, 2009 – by Chris Sadler
Jack Nicholson rules.



16:31 EST   Oct 13th, 2009 – by Owen can see you
Cool I can't wait to get started















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