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name:
Abby Tyler
caste:
gamma (dormant) monkey
last on:
452 days ago









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The Thunderstorm
created: 01/04/09 1:19PM









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Whitney turned back to her desk and started to pack up her things. The very thought of staying after dark at the office sent shivers down her spine.
'Come on Jess, let's go.' Whitney said to Jess.
Just as they were leaving the office, lighting lite up the sky.





15:21 EST   Jan 4th, 2009 – by Chris Sadler
Nice ambiance, Abby. This really sets up what's next to come.



19:33 EST   Jan 5th, 2009 – by Ecarg
This is great! Only issue I have is grammar (You don't use ' instead of ') and spelling.












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